Comments on: TOE Short Story :: My Dad is a Ghost http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/07/10/my-dad-is-a-ghost/ Sat, 19 Sep 2009 22:52:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: kirstensayshi http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/07/10/my-dad-is-a-ghost/comment-page-1/#comment-10149 kirstensayshi Tue, 14 Jul 2009 01:12:47 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=8000#comment-10149 thank you davidson (: thank you davidson (:

]]> By: herocious http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/07/10/my-dad-is-a-ghost/comment-page-1/#comment-10126 herocious Tue, 14 Jul 2009 00:19:12 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=8000#comment-10126 <p style="text-align: justify;">Thanks for another story, Kirsten. You write convincing dialogue, and the way you block it all in long paragraphs makes for a hypnotic read. Keep on writing!

Thanks for another story, Kirsten. You write convincing dialogue, and the way you block it all in long paragraphs makes for a hypnotic read. Keep on writing!

]]> By: kirstensayshi http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/07/10/my-dad-is-a-ghost/comment-page-1/#comment-9893 kirstensayshi Mon, 13 Jul 2009 01:17:02 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=8000#comment-9893 why thank you why thank you

]]> By: WriterX http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/07/10/my-dad-is-a-ghost/comment-page-1/#comment-9345 WriterX Sat, 11 Jul 2009 14:29:55 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=8000#comment-9345 <p style="text-align: justify;">I like the rawness of this story. The first sentence raises some great story questions. And the photo is pretty cool, too.

I like the rawness of this story. The first sentence raises some great story questions. And the photo is pretty cool, too.

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