Comments on: TOE Short Story :: A Private Affair – Part One http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/06/09/toe-short-story-a-private-affair-part-one/ Sat, 19 Sep 2009 22:52:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: WriterX http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/06/09/toe-short-story-a-private-affair-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5969 WriterX Wed, 10 Jun 2009 23:32:22 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=7020#comment-5969 Cool. Thanks, Andrew. Look forward to reading more. Cool. Thanks, Andrew. Look forward to reading more.

]]> By: Andrew http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/06/09/toe-short-story-a-private-affair-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5966 Andrew Wed, 10 Jun 2009 21:55:21 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=7020#comment-5966 <p style="text-align: justify;">WriterX, I'm not sure if I can answer your question confidently as I'm not even sure myself how things are going to unravel, but when I was writing this I certainly did feel that it was the pre-1960 era.

WriterX, I’m not sure if I can answer your question confidently as I’m not even sure myself how things are going to unravel, but when I was writing this I certainly did feel that it was the pre-1960 era.

]]> By: WriterX http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/06/09/toe-short-story-a-private-affair-part-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5965 WriterX Wed, 10 Jun 2009 20:56:34 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=7020#comment-5965 <p style="text-align: justify;">I like the darkness of the scene and the contrast to the brightness in the bar. Definitely feels like London, even without the phone number. Is it present day? I assumed not because he was using a pay phone.

I like the darkness of the scene and the contrast to the brightness in the bar. Definitely feels like London, even without the phone number. Is it present day? I assumed not because he was using a pay phone.

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