you’ve lost me about half way. are you purposely poetic as a method to attract an audience? or is this just your writing style? in writing about fact, you sound like you’re writing about fiction. science-fiction, even. i feel strained in trying to follow your train of thought. i’m sure CAT wrote some pretty funny things, as you had seemed to stress so reassuringly. but i didn’t get it. maybe because i wasn’t drawn to read the quotes. i was so focused on trying to understand what you were saying during this “warm up”. what were you warming up for? you know, as in sports, warm ups shouldn’t be like a full work out. i feel like you could almost hurt yourself in this passage.

- your harsh critic, elfie C.