Comments on: TOE Short Story :: A Think Piece for a Quick Buck http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/ Sat, 19 Sep 2009 22:52:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: mrjellyfish http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/comment-page-1/#comment-137 mrjellyfish Thu, 29 Jan 2009 06:25:27 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=1816#comment-137 <p style="text-align: justify;">I read the comments about the unicorn spoiling it first, and then I read the last sentence of the story by accident as I was scrolling back up, and then I read the story and it still wasn't spoiled. Nice one. The pizza on the key chain is a good detail. <p style="text-align: justify;">Seeing a regular Unicorn is nothing special, it's not as rare as people think. Now, a mutant Unicorn, that is something truly amazing to behold. I've been lucky enough to glimpse the two-horned and the no-horned variety.

I read the comments about the unicorn spoiling it first, and then I read the last sentence of the story by accident as I was scrolling back up, and then I read the story and it still wasn’t spoiled. Nice one. The pizza on the key chain is a good detail.

Seeing a regular Unicorn is nothing special, it’s not as rare as people think. Now, a mutant Unicorn, that is something truly amazing to behold. I’ve been lucky enough to glimpse the two-horned and the no-horned variety.

]]> By: wnu http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/comment-page-1/#comment-136 wnu Thu, 29 Jan 2009 04:37:38 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=1816#comment-136 It did not spoil the ending for me. But I am not too bright. It did not spoil the ending for me. But I am not too bright.

]]> By: herocious http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/comment-page-1/#comment-135 herocious Thu, 29 Jan 2009 03:17:55 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=1816#comment-135 anyone? anyone?

]]> By: ML Kennedy http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/comment-page-1/#comment-134 ML Kennedy Thu, 29 Jan 2009 02:23:51 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=1816#comment-134 I'm too close to be an impartial judge to this thing. I’m too close to be an impartial judge to this thing.

]]> By: herocious http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/comment-page-1/#comment-133 herocious Thu, 29 Jan 2009 02:19:29 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=1816#comment-133 <p style="text-align: justify;">i was worried about that. you don't think it's abstract enough? let me know if you can find one that's not such a spoiler.

i was worried about that. you don’t think it’s abstract enough? let me know if you can find one that’s not such a spoiler.

]]> By: ML Kennedy http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/comment-page-1/#comment-132 ML Kennedy Thu, 29 Jan 2009 02:07:39 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=1816#comment-132 You know the picture up top might give away the ending. You know the picture up top might give away the ending.

]]> By: herocious http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/comment-page-1/#comment-131 herocious Thu, 29 Jan 2009 00:00:52 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=1816#comment-131 <p style="text-align: justify;">hate to say this since i like billy brice, but he shouldn't be so quick to dismiss the chupacabra.

hate to say this since i like billy brice, but he shouldn’t be so quick to dismiss the chupacabra.

]]> By: wnu http://theopenend.com/testv2/2009/01/28/toe-short-story-a-think-piece-for-a-quick-buck/comment-page-1/#comment-130 wnu Wed, 28 Jan 2009 23:46:19 +0000 http://theopenend.com/?p=1816#comment-130 I want to believe. I want to believe.

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